This was amazing it stared of a bit simple but it evolved into a materpiece i really liked the metaphor And hold her while her tears rain it was so sad and made it more true and i could feel the pain as i read it :):) xxx alex xxx

I really hope your friend Tami is ok and iddn't do n e thing she would regret in life... but this poem speaks to me in a way that i have never really been spoken to... you catch my attention and take me for the full ride throughout the poem. great skill.... wish i could have a lil bit of it... keep up the awesome work

Very good, deep, and creative

That is really good. it really appealed to me cuz i just couldn't quit reading it! great job 5/5

xoxo kisses

This is O_O

"The knife is lieing in blood upon the floor,
And the overdose of pills has kicked in
To her, life was an endless war,
And somehow, she knew she would never win."

i luv this ... so sad... this describes so well how some feel about themselves and their parents..