Thats really good i really like it!

Omg wow i can relate to this.. hmm its how i feel.. this is sooo good. i really like how u wrote this and eveyrthing. its very sad tho.. verrry deep and has alot of emotion put in it. i have 2 fav. poets on this site and u r one of htem.. keep on writing
take care
luve ya angie

This is a poem of whati s like a nursey rhyme which makes it so more sincere and real its was so good and really enjoyed reading this poem i will definately read your other poems :):):) keep it up i loved the way it was set out as a nursury rhyme making it seem casual and real to a large amount of people :) xxx alex xxx

Oh My Word!! where do i begin??? first off this poem is freaking amazing and i loed every part of it... the transitons and words and the feelings/emotions... i just felt like i was committing suicide just by rading it... wow.. you are a great writer. please keep it up. i gave ya a 5/5 i woulda given ya something higher if they offered it but they dont.. so yeah... p.s. i love this poem a lot

What Can I Say Apart From Everything The Past 3 Comments Have lol Truely An Amazing Poem, What Amazes Me About This Poem Is That Its Filled With Such Convincing Emotion That It Would Be As Though You'd Actually Committed Suicide, Either That Or Its A Thought An You Could Bare to Do That To Your Mother, Or Its Happend To Some One Close To You, Amazing, Its Such A Hard Topic To Write About, Im Trully Amazed By It

This is such a touching poem! wow.. i thought it was going to be like all the others, ending with a useless death, but the end was so original, i love it. 5/5
keep writing, u have so much potential,
xxx

Wow this poem is just amazing... i have no toher words for it... i loved it.

I relly liked this one, in my top 5 of yours, keep it commin

Bootiful poem but sad at the same tym

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