SUICIDE

by COCO   Aug 31, 2006


Jealous of her friends she was
so she drank to make herself feel good
she drunk so much that she was all alone
so she figured she'll go for a drive and over a cliff shes gone

a young depressed girl she was
depress too long she told to herself
so she figured she'll commit suicide
so she grabbed the gun
and called her friend then boom it went off through her head

the most prettiest girl she was
but she could care less about the life she lived
I'll tell you she wanted badly to die
so she figure she'll lay on railroad track and closed her eyes
and you know killed she was

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  • 18 years ago

    by Regret

    The poem reminded me about that senses fail song "rum is for drinking not burning" but i have to say this i didnt like how you ended it -points to railroad part- my friend was killed by a train but never the less a great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    It is good story a stupid girl. who jelour other and kill herself.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jinx

    I like this poem a lot..it hit close to home=(. awsome poem though!