Honestly i really enjoy reading your poems, they are full of great emotions and deep feelings, you are so great,
keep writting so i could read more of your great poems,

Beautiful poem, great rhythm. Only one small thing, please capitalize your "I" ^-^ good JOb

Again, full of emotions on this one
Keep on writing...

Aww that is such a sad poem but very nice and well written. keep it up.5/5

Full of emotions, yes, but rarely does one line rush to the reader. I could nt get a feeling form this. Maybe instead of repeating, "Cry after cry. Tear after tear" you could use some more descriptive words about what it feels like to be abused, watch everyday people who are not abused, etc.

I love your poems....i loved this poem...its os sad...but so true

This is so sad...But I loved it. Your
writting reminds so much of mine. I can
actually feel your pain when I read it.
I too ask myself on a daily basis those
same questions. but when I see other
people out there like me It gives me a
reason to be strong and makes me
want to try even harder so that I can
show them a better way. Thank you
for sharing your gift.

Love ya
Letty

I ask myself this all the time
I feel like im not worth a dime
((I did not like these lines at all.. They really took away from how well the rest was written.))

But great job. Strong in emotion, again; great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

There were some spelling mistakes and it could be more organized. Other then that it was really good. Keep up the goodl work. *5/5*

Alyson

Very good poem, great flow, 5/5!!!

Good start. The ending was nice. The beginning can have shorter lines. The thing you need to concentrate on is imagery. Keep it up!

Another good poem, I liked the title. The rhymes were good and the flow was ok. Keep it up!

Wow very emotional write. I loved it. Great Job!! The flow and structure were both great.

I do believe this word, "last" should be changed to "lasts" in this line, "but that one smile only last a while" so it would read, "but that one smile only lasts a while"

Other than that, wonderful job, I really liked it. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

Great job!
Keep up the great work.
5/5 God Bless

~*tay*~

Wow that's really good you have talent
especially those

cry after cry
tear after tear
why cant I die
why am I here?

Good job

So few words yet the feeling is so so strong, well done. i have to say, you pulled it off brilliantly!

bravo! 5/5 david

This poem is really good. i can relate to it. the emotion coming out of it is strong and it speaks out to me. i like it a lot. good job