Angels with black wings,
Demons walk the earth,
The cries of people sting,
As needles lay along the path I walk,
It hurts to talk,
It burns to bleed,
A new life is what we need,
We plead,
But there are no second chances,
Once you have sinned,
You are in the bin,
And the only way to experience a better life,
Is a, glance:
A glance through the void which separates us,
A world with great understanding, love and trust...
This is our hell,
And that is their heaven.
Hey,
and again I do not understand why no one left a comment. is it so hard to leave a comment and vote? now about the poem: I like the subject of the poem but i do think that the flow is not so great, it is kind of rocky..if you know what I mean. but overall its a nice poem. 5/5
kisses stephanie