:) I really enjoyed this. Keep writing!

~~Spanish367

Very beautiful. very true and very beautiful. i love it. u write wonderfully. i read ur discussion hing and thought that maybe u would like sum1 to tlk to. cause i'll listen. if u want though. i have a two friends going through this and i am too. so if u wanna tlk email me wildo_luvs_ya@hotmail.com or if u have a mobile txt or call me on 0448914748. i'll reply.
love willow xxoo

Simple yet effective. Good job.

How it should be.....sweet destiny

Good poem.

The line
"They only be themselves," sounded a little pirate-ish to me. But that might just be me.

Other than that the whole poem was very good. I love the feeling you captured. It was genius. I've never read a poem on this topic, and I'm sure if I ever do read another it won't be as good. Great job.

-mo-

I like it! It has a meaning that isn't selfish. It tells of other's suffering instead of just your own. These ar e perhaps my favorite type of poem.