I loved the part :::

but the funny thing is now days dad
kids are growing up so fast
childhood is not so sacred
dollies and soldiers do not last

Great poem-5/5 from me.

Okay overall i thought this poem was good, I liked the way you rhymed only 2 lines of each stanza! I think you meant "Now i know" instead of "Know i know"! I happened to really like these to lines

"childhood is not so sacred
dollies and soldiers do not last"

I liked the meaning of this poem also i can relate! Good Job 5/5!