Wow! what a powerful poem, yet written so well.. you really placed an image in my mind of this character, great write..5/5..
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Kirsty Palmer xXx

Thats the best poem!Really powerful words! Greta poem! Keep up the great work!

Really good poem! keep writing! :-) katie

Wow, Really intense and realistic. I loved it.

Hey, I know you commented me a while back so i thought i would do the same, I really love this poem you are really talented and i think this really portrays what most people go through and the intensity of it all! I loved it 5/5!