Wow.. such a powerful, and sad poem, you wrote it well, and your rhyming was great... i hope that this isnt true! 5/5..
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Kirsty Palmer xXx

I hope this isnt true but it was a deep poem and its real good so keep it up 5/5

Really good poem! i really understood it my dad died too i know what your goin threw