by awww Aug 31, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
This poem is in filipino, so if you cant speak tagalog you will not understand it. If you cant read it |
by ROSE
Galing!..sweet torture ang dating?..galing mu talaga!...naka relate ako dun..sana magbati kau dalawa noh?.para masaya.=D..More power!.=) |
by ECILA ice
Ok hope you can handle some little critism.. just wanted to be honest and wanted to help you.. una, ndi ko maintindihan kung may rhyming ba tlga ung poem mo o wla? coz as i try to check it out, there are some stanzas that rhymes and some doesn't rhyme. second, i love the message though it somehow confuses me.. sino ba tlga ang iyong main character (i mean to whom do you dedicate this poem)? isang kaibigan ba o isang mahal mo (as in your "ex")?.. |
by Jessica
Wow, that was amazing! Lol, yesh.. Sorry, I don't really understand.. But it seems cool.. =P Anywayyss, can you write your poems in english next time? Tehee.. Nice job |
by Misstress
Okey ito ah, |