United As One

by The Black Stallion   Aug 31, 2006


United As One
By:Drayce Marks

I'm in love with whom I consider to be the most beautiful girl in school

Being in her presence everyday really rules

I like her so much

I dream of her looks and her touch

I never thought I would care for any girl like this

These feelings I have are too strong too dismiss

The day she calls me hers it will be absolute bliss

Then I'll no longer be the man all the people dis

I wait for the day

That me and her come together and won't stray

United as one we will be

So much in love for all the world to see

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ms Choco Latte

    Well its ok

  • 18 years ago

    by Savanha

    Good, only... make it so it makes sense to you, dont bend it so it will be what others want.

    4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    This is better than comparing her to coffee... And there was a hint of emotion to it.. So nicely done.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovemelodyx3

    Veery good. I know how you feel!
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by sweet_tears

    Wow awesome this poem is beautiful this is the your best poem.I love this one sooo much.This is great.5/5
    xoxoTashaxoxo

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