Comments : United As One

  • 18 years ago

    by Jazzy

    Omg That was So cute drayce your so sweet hunnie x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by Roxy

    Thats amazing so cute and amazing i love it well done trule madly deeply cool
    xoxroxyxo

  • 18 years ago

    by sweet_tears

    Wow awesome this poem is beautiful this is the your best poem.I love this one sooo much.This is great.5/5
    xoxoTashaxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovemelodyx3

    Veery good. I know how you feel!
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    This is better than comparing her to coffee... And there was a hint of emotion to it.. So nicely done.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Savanha

    Good, only... make it so it makes sense to you, dont bend it so it will be what others want.

    4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ms Choco Latte

    Well its ok