Wow! this is such a powerful poem, and you write it so well.. you have som much talent.. great flow, great topic.. percetly writte piece!5/5..
Best Wishes..
Please can you rate and comment on my poems, Thanks..
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GR8 poem, real deep. Kisty pamer said it all. ur poems git bitter each time i read. good job:)

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Hehe thats so beautiful! jus like u! lol u seriously r a good writer, betta than me! n i can relate 2 ur poems so well! xxxBETHxxx

Uuh, now i feel like shit, seriously your poems are killing me, they are soo good that they can reduce a man to tears>>>>>me! im crying, im so sorry i made you feel this way, i thought you knew i loved you, but reading this has made me wonder! i will always love you though, dont you dare think for 1 minuite that i dont,
otherwise good poem, spellings arent what makes a poem good, its what the poem does to you that matters!
all my love tom
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