by PassionatelyMarla Aug 31, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Once upon a time there was a girl.. she loved life she had dreams she was brave.. she always had a smile on her face.. |
THAT WAS SO FRIGGN INTESE>AMAMIZNG AMAZING..keep it up wow wow wow |
by xxMagioxx
Omg omg omg lol its so good I can't say it enough to show you how good it is lol I almost cried, I can relate a lot |
Wow.. this peice was so stong and well written, the message that you sent out was well understood, and i can totally relate to desiree... we do only ask for human kindness, but often misunderstood! great write 5/5.. |
by Desiree
I loved your piece. I think I understand fully what you wanted your readers to understand. I often get hurt by people in this world as well and it's because my ideals are too high. But doesn't it disgust you. We're not asking for much just human kindness to one another and love. How hard is that? |