I loved your piece. I think I understand fully what you wanted your readers to understand. I often get hurt by people in this world as well and it's because my ideals are too high. But doesn't it disgust you. We're not asking for much just human kindness to one another and love. How hard is that?

Wow.. this peice was so stong and well written, the message that you sent out was well understood, and i can totally relate to desiree... we do only ask for human kindness, but often misunderstood! great write 5/5..
Best Wishes..
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Kirsty Palmer xXx

Omg omg omg lol its so good I can't say it enough to show you how good it is lol I almost cried, I can relate a lot

Thxs for making my night :)

Tony :D love ya :)

THAT WAS SO FRIGGN INTESE>AMAMIZNG AMAZING..keep it up wow wow wow

lissa