Hey lol this is really good

Wowi lvoed it AMMZING AMZING WORKK..keep ti up hunn the flow hte detial everyhting GREAT STUFF

lissa

Awesome, I like how you ended it. I also read another poem of yours, and it ended in the same way. the "this poem was about you" part. Nice.

I been there before and believe me honey boys dont catch on that easily he will probably read it like 50 times and dont know..lol..5/5
~Shareeda