Sorry for all the comments I'm leaving,
It's just such emotion in your writing,
I can feel how intense you are with your writing,
I'm utterly astound,
I only wish to write like you do,
So freely so open,

Please read and rate my poem "Untouchable"

I know exactly how u feel.. like all these questions running thru your mind.. that u'd never ask aloud but u wanna kno so bad.. well thats how it is for me at least. And it feels so good to hear him say at least one of the thoughts in your head, cuz thats 1 less question to worry about. good poem