Dragging the balde across your arm |
I know exactly how u feel...ive called the razor my best friend before...and when u get wrapped up in cutting enough...it truely is..u really capture what its like in this poem |
by David
The last two lines are so so good! they really made the poem excellent! you always need a strong ending. to stay in their minds and make them want more! i love your poems. so so perfect. |
It's scary how good pain can actually feel at certain times in life, you wouldn't think pain could be such a good thing, but it is 5/5 |