Tis sad,i hope it lasts.

nice, keep it up.

I like this poem

Written with passion
loved it

Good work, conveyed well, good use of rhyme and repetition.

Cheerz Nicko

Ah, how sweet is love and how hard is its pain
nice poem,
well done
keep it up :)

NICE POEM... WELL WRITTEN

I really like this poem. The way you flow with your words is well written. I enjoyed the first half of this poem most because of the uniqueness I sensed. A great job indeed. 5/5

Nice piece, i like the rhyming scheme and how well your poem flows. Keep up

You did very good on this poem. I like it 5/5

The poem puts me in a state of life happening... i can almost feel a sadness in you that's finally dying... slowly giving way to a happy future for u :)
loved the poem
keep em coming