by LadyPearl Aug 31, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Melodies hidden away |
Such inspiration! I loved it, and it was so meaningful. |
I do like this one... You explain things so well that others can't - I can't say that enough. This doesn't compare to 'Jade Eyes' (Though nothing does) but it very well written, as is all your poems. Good job. |
Ooo. Lots of meaning in this, I can see. Very well done. Not much I have to suggest for this one. The flow was good, rhyming was exquisite...Great job. =) 5/5 xoxo |
by Robie Lincer
This is a very good poem! with lots of emotions and feelings in it! and it has messages in it!!! which made it wow! |
by Natalie
Excellent job on this one, Noni. I loved the message in this. I really liked the 3rd & 4th stanza alot. They stood out the most to me. Great job! Keep it up! 5/5 |