Prayer

by LadyPearl   Aug 31, 2006


Melodies hidden away
Spread your wings..fly...again
May timeless bells ring once more
And let the brightness take it's soar

May all children live with harmony
Far away from traces of discord
Let laughter shimmer in the air
Let it's voice dance around with flair

May every broken soul find a path
-find a meaning to live once more
Let darkness be swept from it's lair
To seek enough strength to prepare

May wounded hearts find reason to heal
And let renewal, flow through their veins
Let curiosity, discover, burst into to life
Fleeing, forgetting, remnants of pain

May all prayers said to the sun or moon
Be heard across the vast land and seas
Do not abandon what your heart has to say
Every meaningful prayer has something to portray

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  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Such inspiration! I loved it, and it was so meaningful.

    "May wounded hearts find reason to heal"

    I loved those lines, and if only that could happen my Dear. You are very talented, as I have said before, and from the date that this was submitted, it should have way more than 120 visits! 5/5 =]

    -Jenna.

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I do like this one... You explain things so well that others can't - I can't say that enough. This doesn't compare to 'Jade Eyes' (Though nothing does) but it very well written, as is all your poems. Good job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Ooo. Lots of meaning in this, I can see. Very well done. Not much I have to suggest for this one. The flow was good, rhyming was exquisite...Great job. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is a very good poem! with lots of emotions and feelings in it! and it has messages in it!!! which made it wow!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Excellent job on this one, Noni. I loved the message in this. I really liked the 3rd & 4th stanza alot. They stood out the most to me. Great job! Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``