Comments : Empty Child

  • 18 years ago

    by [x]sad[x]and[x]alone[x]

    This poem is really good. i love it!!
    [x]sad[x]and[x]alone[x]

  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Aww i lvoe this poem. its sooo sad but i can relate to the empty child u were talking about.. great poem.. keep on writing
    take care
    luve angie

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    IN this poem i kind of felt you were talkign ot the littel gurl within you..idk but yea felt liek you were tryign to contemplate all you'd been thoough and tellig her to move on as if nothing happened. great job loved it.

    lissa