Beautiful job. It was short, but you started and ended it nicely. The flow was also good. Keep it up

Wow nice poem

Wow- I like this one- short, descriptive and it actually signifies something.excellent- 5/5

This poem is amazing, and i am in awe at your work. this is such a wonderful poem!

I love this poem, it was short and well written, not sure if I get it though but I like it.

Basically this rhyme or poem represents an ex-girlfriend of mine, taking the relationship out from under me, and throwing it away. And with that, she threw away my heart.