I felt I could totally relate to the pain and sadness in this write. Very deep emotions which you have expressed beautifully in this write!

Hey hunnie.. this poem was like omg i loved alot.. i could just feel the pain like it was real.. very nice.. love ur writting.. always Rachy

OH EM GEE. i love this, too. like SERIOUSLY love this.
it flowed absolutely PERFECTLY!!!! it was brilliant!!! YOU TALENTED LITTLE THING YOU!!!!! no really, i loved it.
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Geo