Comments : I want to be there

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    I want to be there, holding you tight
    Falling asleep in your arms tonight.
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    this is just.....outstanding!!!
    very greatly written and the title was inspiring too
    you have a great talent, keep it up
    waiting for more =)
    Best Of Luck
    NemO xxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5. You have a way of writing love poems! ur on my favs.