Ha, that was good. thanks for proving i have a dirty mind :P

LOL, I wont be able to go the dentist anymore without thinking of your poem, great write 5/5

Thanks everyone in advance for your comments. Please be blunt with your responses.good/bad/how i can make them better... thanks all.

I agree with tuffy, that you for proving i have a dirty mind!
great poem... 5/5