Wow loads of feelings....i really love how u put ur words together..and i know how u feel....but good poem 5/5 good work keep it up
auna

Ooh .. thats a sad one.. really sad! u know wen one door shuts another one opens.. read my poem "the voice inside me" it might inspire u a bit

Deadly poem really good

Hey sweetie. You sound like you have faith. This is a good thing. But you have to hold on to that. Believe me I know. I mean I tried living my life without God. It doesnt work! I mean I tried not to talk about god think about him but i ended up seeing something horrible or i would need help! I couldn't do it. If nothing else try it. Its really hard... I would also suggest you read the footprints poem and apply it to your own life... I'll get you a copy if you want!

I totally undserstand how you feel. god gave up on me a long time ago. email me if you ever need to talk.

Hey thanx for the comment, i'll try n do that, i really like this poem its great, keep writing n take care
love
*kat*

Its so sad.. i know exactly how u feel tho. Great poem!!
~aly~

Awww he lisens dont worry
this is excellent its how i feel you are good :)

Hey sweetie,
I'm starting to get worried! Email me at hyyper1@yahoo.com or shatterglass_girl@msn.com!!! I love ya!!!
Katie

Another deep emotional gr8 poem. keep it up:)