This poem is a deep poem, with great meanings into it, I really like the way you wrote this, it captured reader's attention. very well done and keep it up
your poems are great.

I relli liked this poem! 5/5 Your a relli good writter, keep it up!

Luvd it! great imagination... and i could c everythin!

Exellent. you have a fantasic way of using abstract phrase to illistraight your work.

your fan as always

Ruby