by J Avery Johnson Mar 9, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
IN THE SHADOW OF LOVE, |
by laycee
avry you are a good poet and seem to have a lot of love in you which is a good thing i love your words and the way you use them thats a talent. you once commented on my poetry and said it was diffrent well i am diffrent and i think that being diffrent is a good thing and you said it wasnt bad either. the thing with your poetry is that its not diffrent i could go on here and find a million poems about love, so maybe you should try to write some poems when your not feeling all that love and i bet it would be just as good as your poems about love. i am not critisizing you in a bad way i am simply trying to give you some other ideas. But i will say that you are a good poet lovey dovey poetry is just not really my taste but thats not a bad thing well just keep up your honest writting and just write from your heart :) |