by Jessica Sep 1, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Soft heart beating heavily |
by Robie Lincer
This is another good poem! you really got the talent in writing, it was sad, and very sad! the flow was good! |
Ah!! Great poem!! This is so sad!!! I know exactly how it feels!! anyways it was another great write and it flowed and rhymed nicely!! you did a wonderful job!! 5/5! |
by Natalie
Awh! Wow! This was really sad. Awh! I just wanna give you a big hug right now. :P But then you'd probably catch my sickness and then you'd be sick, too. lmao. Anywho, back to the poem. It was wonderful. Very nice flow, I liked it alot. Keep it up! Ily. 5/5 |
Yes, it was such a sad poem but very beautifully written, Jessy, as always. I really love your work, no matter the topic or the length of it; you always get a great poem! Keep it up! 5/5 |
Aww this is sad :-( But very well written. Keep it up! |