A Soft Heart Cruelly Broken

by Jessica   Sep 1, 2006


Soft heart beating heavily
Eyes can't be drawn away
Plump lips begin to pucker
Seeing him, makes her day..

Wrapped around his finger
Cruelly stringing her along
His heart set on another girl
Can't he see that this is wrong?

Sending letters of her love
Sweetly smiling when she can
Only to be slowly broken down
When from her kiss he ran..

All she wanted was his love
A single kiss or gentle glance
Instead he broke her heart
By taking away her only chance..

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is another good poem! you really got the talent in writing, it was sad, and very sad! the flow was good!

  • Ah!! Great poem!! This is so sad!!! I know exactly how it feels!! anyways it was another great write and it flowed and rhymed nicely!! you did a wonderful job!! 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Awh! Wow! This was really sad. Awh! I just wanna give you a big hug right now. :P But then you'd probably catch my sickness and then you'd be sick, too. lmao. Anywho, back to the poem. It was wonderful. Very nice flow, I liked it alot. Keep it up! Ily. 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Yes, it was such a sad poem but very beautifully written, Jessy, as always. I really love your work, no matter the topic or the length of it; you always get a great poem! Keep it up! 5/5
    Best wishes,

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

  • 18 years ago

    by Landon Carter

    Aww this is sad :-( But very well written. Keep it up!