Sweetie this is a really good poem, the best poems dont ryhme, they brign feelings and emotion, and that is what this poem has done.

i love you sweetie x0x0

WOW that wass sooo good:)..you have an amaizing talent of expressing yourself thruogh poems.. i hope things get better for you soon...i dont liek knowing ur upset:(...i love you xoxo

This was a really good poem, i hope your proud of your work coz your an awsum writter! 5/5