Awesome poem!! 5/5

Wonderful Bill, another superlative write by you, excellent!!!

Beautiful, and moving. A wonderful write with such a beautiful, deep meaning. Great work as always my friend!

Wow....I love it!!

Great poem man. I wish i could write like you can but im nowhere as close to you. tell me wat you think bouty some of mine.

Wow... this is a great poem Bill... its very heartfelt and emotional.. i loved the opening and the ending. they were amazing..beautiful.. very deep and meaningful! great write 5/5..
Please can you rate and comment on my poems?.. Thanks..
Best Wishes..
Kirsty xx

Good poem..dere =]

That was a great poem it was sweet i really liked that last stanze...keep it up