U like this its great you are a good writer keep up the good work.5/5.
xoxotashaxoxo

You have interesting word choice, but the flow was so broken....i'm not sure what to say..

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

Very good i liked it....

Melissa

This was a pretty good poem although some of the rhyming through me off but all together good job!!

Aw. That was very good. I liked the emotion and depth. Nice work.

-Jennifer. Overall Rating: 4/5

YeA I kInDa AgReE wItH xDarkSuicidex ThE fLoW Is KiNd Of BrOkN..((word of advise, not all poems need to ryme.))

keep writing practice makes perfect.