This poem is very good...i really enjoyed reading this!!!! keep up the good writting.

Very cute poem.. i like it a lot.. very enjoyable read.. keep up the good work!

Although I didn't quite know who or what was happening in this poem, I did give you a good rating. =P

The descriptions mixed with the beautifuly written stanzas is what impredded me the most. The words just seemed to pop out at me. I don't know what else to say, but well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

This is a beautiful poem, i enjoyed reading it alot. Well done 5/5

Very well done! Try and capitolize the first letters of your stanzas. Other than that, it was great! God bless 5/5
<3Tayy