by Hind Sep 1, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
She was beautiful |
Pretty good poem, although I personally think the 'great' in the last line of the second stanza would make it flow better. But I really like the meaning of the poem and you expressed it well. 5/5 |
by Sarah Ann
Beautifullll |
by *Isolde*
Great poem and very well written hind. 5/5 keep it comming |