I love you, please dont ever go away

by Joaddan Lira   Sep 1, 2006


The minutes pass like hours
each day seems like a year
this is how time goes by
whenever you're not here
my days are gloomy
the nights i lay awake
for this type of suffering
there is no drug i can take
but, as soon as you return to me
there are no clouds and the sky so wide
i guess this is the special effect
of you here by my side
now the flowers are blooming
and i think i like it this way
so, help keep nature beautiful
please baby, don't ever go away!!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Static

    Very nice structure, as was said before it does restrict your meaning but its still good as. I can learn from that advise too. anyways well done