Comments : Heart with a shield

  • 18 years ago

    by broken reflection

    I've had the exact same feeling... sometimes going over the edge and telling people how you feel can just take the weight of your shoulders... *hugs* keep up the good poetry.

  • 18 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    THiS iS A GOOD POEM! i`M SORRY ABOUT MY OTHER COMMENT;; i SOUNDED REALLY RUDE AND STUPiD AND i`M SORRY;; i ALWAYS GET A LiTTLE UPSET WHEN PEOPLE SAY "BAD" STUFF ABOUT MY POEMS. EVEN THOUGH THAT WASN`T EVEN REALY MEAN;; ANYWAYS;; SORRY AND GOOD POEM!

    -SHELBY-

  • Very well writtenit flows nicly makes since ad cuts deep. 5/5 ..........cassandra