To my friend who is always there
Our friendship could never compare
With feelings we cant express
I could never love you less
i really liked that part and it really stood out from the rest of the poem.....even though it was the beggening verse

THiS iS A GOOD POEM;; VERY SWEET!

-SHELY-

*SHELBY, HA i SPELLED MY OWN NAME WRONG! LOL

Great job 5/5

A beautiful tribute to a friend who, obviously, means a lot to you. Very nice. 5/5

Thank you for you nice comment :)
Kind Regards,
Luna

Thats a nice tribute =]
was quite short and to the point =]
nice rhyming scheme it was different in some stanzas =]

*thanks for the comment on mine it was supposed to be long as i were challenged but thanks =]=]=]*

~*~Jen~*~

Awww i loved it! that's what friendship is all about. i have one friend like like that myself and it feels great. that part about the hearts beating as one, that's so true. good job!

This is real sweet...I have a friend just like that...we've been friends since high school...which has been many years now....good friends are hard to come by. If you find that special one...appreciate it...and this poem shows that you do...

To my friend who is always there
Our friendship could never compare
With feelings we cant express
I could never love you less

Nice opening ^.......Keep writing....All the best, Debbie

A great poem about a great friendship. It's wonderful that you've found yourself such a good friend, I love the poem as well!