WOW.
That has got to be on e of the most romantic things I have ever read. Seriously. Amazing. What a dream to have come true! I lvoe your poetry.
Keep it up!

God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

I could have sworn I've read this before...

But anyways, I really enjoyed it. Most people can't pull of love poems for one can never truly capture the feeling of love, but you did it to your best ability ((as does everyone else who succeeds like you have)) and wrote a wonderful tale. I loved the rhyming scheme, as well. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Ok this is like one of the best love poems ive read, and i dont like love poemsm that much, but i loved this one, it was so cuute and it made my smile and think of my boy, =].. almost flawless except for like 2 things-

Your fingers entwined in mine, holding your body up to me
The love between us was blind for *xallx*i think- *everyone-not all* to see
Your kiss a tender invitation for my delight
As our lips lightly collided under the stars that *something?* night. (this line seems too short.)

but thats it. other wise mmmmmmmazing, i loved it,.

5|5

x.xLauren