A girl of age 5

by SadKuteAngel   Sep 2, 2006


A girl
of age 5
sits outside
and cries

her mommy
has left
and her daddy
had died

so she
sits outside
on a
cloudy nite

these clouds
form to water
that fall
from da sky

her tears
mix in
so no one
knows
she cries

she has
a blade
against
her wrist
but no one
see her cuts

she goes
deeper and deeper
as she bleeds
crimson red

everything
looks blurry
as shes
falls
to da ground
with blood
all around

everyone
looks at her
as she
slowly
disappears
into da heavens
above, with
her daddy
that she loves

and all
her sorrow
and pain
disappears
and gets lost
and never
will return
to this girl
of five

*plz comment, its my lastest poem*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jackielynn

    Wow i this is sad *tear*lol.. let me know when you have more poems i love your work!

  • 18 years ago

    by me

    Very good poem but i wonder if dat girl is u??anyways i liked it a lott i like most of ur poems and dis one too great job and when u get a new one tell me cuz im looking foward to more 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    Fairly good poem, hard to read with the spelling errors, although i know they were deliberate... creative format, nice rhythm

    i especially like the fifth stance, nice work