Fairly good poem, hard to read with the spelling errors, although i know they were deliberate... creative format, nice rhythm

i especially like the fifth stance, nice work

Very good poem but i wonder if dat girl is u??anyways i liked it a lott i like most of ur poems and dis one too great job and when u get a new one tell me cuz im looking foward to more 5/5

Wow i this is sad *tear*lol.. let me know when you have more poems i love your work!