Oh my goodness i thought this was great, the flow was magnificent and the meaning and content of your words were powerful, and the repition of or you would die, was good, and it fit in there perfect

I am the sky,
I am the earth,
I am the rain-drops,
I am an unloved soul,
Who, had lost control"

favortie part ^^

nicely done

a well deserved

5/5
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