Comments : One night, one day, only one

  • 18 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    Very nice job flowed well and for two stanzas it was great i would like to have seen it longer but it was great 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    It was pretty cute. I would change some things so it flowed a bit better and i agree i woulda liked a bit more.
    but other then that you did a great job!