She Was Afraid Of What She Already Felt

Good Job, It felt like to me that the rhyming was a bit forced! The flow was good! I also thought you could be more descriptive on the words you used! Other then that good write!! 4/5

OMG!!!! This is soo good! It reminds me of how i feel because i strive so hard for everyone to like me because it makes me feel horriable when people dont like me i know i shouldnt care about what they think i try not to! but it is sooo hard not too! later Lil M

5/5. Again.. Your a truly amazing poet! You have great ways of writing. I just loved how u put together this poem!

Another very nicely written poem that i really enjoyed reading, great job
5/5

That is a VERY good poem
its nice and deep