Escaping You

by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-   Sep 2, 2006


I am the survivor
of all your abuse
i finally told
all my friends the truth

its not normal
to come school each day
with new bruises
that wont go away

you thought id collapse
under all your pain
but inside i know
that strength is what ive gained

you thought with out you
I wouldn't exist
But now I'm stronger than ever
All in the absence of your fist

-please vote or comment, this is for all those who are suffering abuse.
all comment will be returned- love Mel-

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  • 18 years ago

    by ♥Leah♥

    This really got to me. i ahve been there and had that done to me and kicked him out and made myself stay away from him ever since. most of my poetry is about him. check it out if ya want. thanks for this. great and wonderful job.

  • 18 years ago

    by .:miss briTTney:.

    Nice flow. love the meaning and what your representing. 5/5 for me!
    miss brittney.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Mirabile

    Mel, this is so deep, great job:)
    luv,
    Sarah

  • 18 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Wow, i'm abused all the time and i don't no how to go on anymore...any tips your poem is soo good it gives me just a little bit of hope in this f.u.c.k.e.d. up thing i call my life
    anyways great job 5/5
    auna

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ

    Good poem, I like the meaning of this poem but i think you could of been more descriptive like using more descriptive words! I also noticed that you said "under the your pain"! The flow was good!! i have to give it a 4/5!! I think you could do more with this poem!!

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