Well written poem, well done 5/5 xx

Very well written.

I really liked this poem! 5/5 from me. You've written a great perspective on abuse.

Good poem, I like the meaning of this poem but i think you could of been more descriptive like using more descriptive words! I also noticed that you said "under the your pain"! The flow was good!! i have to give it a 4/5!! I think you could do more with this poem!!

Wow, i'm abused all the time and i don't no how to go on anymore...any tips your poem is soo good it gives me just a little bit of hope in this f.u.c.k.e.d. up thing i call my life
anyways great job 5/5
auna

Mel, this is so deep, great job:)
luv,
Sarah

Nice flow. love the meaning and what your representing. 5/5 for me!
miss brittney.

This really got to me. i ahve been there and had that done to me and kicked him out and made myself stay away from him ever since. most of my poetry is about him. check it out if ya want. thanks for this. great and wonderful job.