by ♥ღ alwayz... forgotten ღ♥ Sep 2, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Theres a girl no one knows of |
Thank you for the comment. Greatly written poem btw. 5/5 |
I lovee this poem and its really good... |
:( I can relate to this very well.. how you wrote it, it was amazing, wonderful! |
Wow-really emotional piece. I really love it; very well written and the flow is flawless---The only two small errors I found are: |
by firexflys
The rhyme was off a bit but non the less it was still great and was really deep keep up the great work 5.5 |