Wow...a touching piece. You expressed the pain of self harm wonderfully in this poem. Well done.

Physical pain is nothing
when your broken inside
always wanting to escape it all
and wish you had already died
FINALLLYY. someone gets it. another greatt poem for you too.

The rhyme was off a bit but non the less it was still great and was really deep keep up the great work 5.5

Wow-really emotional piece. I really love it; very well written and the flow is flawless---The only two small errors I found are:
"is all just a attention game"
a should be an

"when your broken inside"
your should be you're

Great poem! 5/5 Keep it up---

:( I can relate to this very well.. how you wrote it, it was amazing, wonderful!

Love Steven

I lovee this poem and its really good...

Thank you for the comment. Greatly written poem btw. 5/5