I really like this poem, its written perfectly, oh and thnx for tha comment too, anyways ima bounce
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~kat~

That is really good. Thankz for commenting on my poem. But yours is better tehe

I loved that poem very much, the words were strong and deep. It was really sad and made me think. You have so much talent, keep it up
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This is really good brah. i love how you ended it, it really is very sad but you did a really good job.