by TrueLovesVictim Sep 2, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
I miss the way it used to be |
by cassanova
Nice iwrite poems like this you should read some of my featured poems |
I miss my "YOU and ME" use-to-be life too... not literally you...lol but yeah... you get me right? great poem... |
Great poem there... Great basis... I don't really wanna say stupid words... for an apparently sad poem.... but i appreciate this poem... Keep writing.. |
Nice right, i think you should make it longer, but it is still good |
by Truest Lies
Some of the lines were a little forced in rhyme, as though you put in the first words that rhymed...like |