Some of the lines were a little forced in rhyme, as though you put in the first words that rhymed...like

Its sad that i was the one who said
its over and went crying to bed
I tried to tell you simple things
but all you heard were all these rings

I didn't quite understand "all these rings" at first, but then I got that it was like rings in your ears---so, yeah, I liked that. The beginning I liked though, because one day I want to have someone who can be like that with me.

//T.L.//

Nice right, i think you should make it longer, but it is still good

Great poem there... Great basis... I don't really wanna say stupid words... for an apparently sad poem.... but i appreciate this poem... Keep writing..

I miss my "YOU and ME" use-to-be life too... not literally you...lol but yeah... you get me right? great poem...

Nice iwrite poems like this you should read some of my featured poems